The first message.

 

From Prof. Stiner to Hata (1998/05/17)

 

>Dear Hata,

>Thank you for > The first message sent on > Date: 15 May 98 15:50:34.

>Every week I will send your message back to you. The lines with words

>you wrote will have ">" at the beginning of the line. Lines with my

>words will not have ">" at the beginning.

 

.>My corrections of your English will be under your sentences. I will

>usually rewrite the whole sentence.

 

>I will also make comments on what you tell me each week. I will try to

>keep my comments short!

 

> Dear Dr. M Susan Stiner,

> Nice to meet you. My name is Sonotada Hata.

> Let me tell you about myself.

 

> I stady specialty accounting.

>I study accounting.

>I like play basketball.

>I like to play basketball.

 

>What position do you play? Are you on a regular team?

>There is a professional basketball team in Philadelphia. Philadelphia is

>a city near me. The name of the team is the Philadelphia 76-ers

>(Seventy-sixers). Philadephia was the nation's first capitol. The U.S.

>was founded in 1776. We just call the team the "sixers." One of the

>men on the team is Tim Thomas. He played for Villanova for one year.

>He was very good!

 

> I will get stating menber.

>I'm sorry, Hata, I don't know what this means.

 

> If there are any mistakes in my English,please

> tell me.

>Don't worry, Hata, I will!

 

> Please call me "Hata".

>

> Sincerely,

> Sonotada Hata.

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>This is an attachment to the first message. Please tell me in your next message:

>1. That you were able to open and read this plain text attachment.

>2. What Internet browser do you use?

>3. What word processing software do you use for

>a. English documents?

>b. Japanese documents?

 

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