Lesson 3
Dear Prof. Sue Garreis:
This is the revised message.
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Dear Emily,
Thanks
for your third message.
I’d like to go to the beach or somewhere quiet with a good view for a
vacation. But, most of my vacation I usually go to some famous tourist
attractions. They are easier to be found, whether in a tour book or on the
internet. When I invite my friends to go with me, it will be more acceptable
that if they have heard the sight spot before. And the surrounding
environment should be convenient as a well-known tourist attraction.
I think I really need a little trip recently. Weather in Japan is going into
plum rains period. It will be rainy this week, next week…Only one or two
days are not rainy, but cloudy. In China, I live in the north, from the end
of May, the weather become warmer and warmer. But, In Japan, after spring,
it comes the plum rains period, it will be a little cold. I haven’t been in
a plum rains period before. So I have no idea how long it will last. I hope
it will end soon.
=>My
comments follow.
This will be a brief message. .
The new lesson is about the sources of financial information that is
available on the Net.
Homework:
1. I always check your message in the afternoon or at night on Monday.
And I usually do the homework when I have a time at school.
2. AT&T will invest the following five key focus areas: enterprise
mobility applications, cloud, platforms, systems and e-capabilities to
automate, enhance and simplify business customers’ experience and support.
3. I have visited the University of Maryland’s website and have seen
the Department of Accounting and Information Assurance.
4. I use Google Japan to find “balance sheet.” There were about
33,100,000 hits.
5. The accounting was somewhat hard. The English was about right with
the help of using a dictionary.
Sincerely,
Emily